Transform Your Writing From Telling to Showing

Stop spinning your wheels with generic writing advice that doesn’t address your specific pages.

You’ve read the books. You know you should “show, don’t tell.” But when you look at your own manuscript, you can’t see what needs fixing. Sound familiar?


What Makes This Coaching Different

Unlike writing books or generic feedback, this is manuscript-specific coaching that identifies exactly what’s happening on your pages:

  • Spot passive voice and weak verbs you’ve been missing
  • Transform static descriptions into dynamic scenes that put readers in your characters’ bodies
  • Stay in scene longer instead of jumping to flashbacks and backstory
  • Master point of view transitions that don’t confuse readers
  • Build sustainable writing habits that create momentum

Real Results

“I’ve been on a high since September 2nd. I wrote 5,000 words in three weeks – probably more than I wrote in the entire past year. I literally can’t wait to get back to the house each morning to write.” – Todd G.

How It Works

Small Group Workshop: Join 3-5 serious writers for bi-monthly sessions. Get targeted feedback in a supportive environment with writers at your level. The meeting day and time will depend on the availability of the group.

Who This Is For

  • You’re deep into a novel (not just starting)
  • You’re committed to showing up consistently
  • You want specific, actionable feedback on your actual pages
  • You’re ready to move beyond basic writing advice to craft-level work

Investment

$300/month

Ready to stop guessing what’s wrong and start fixing what matters?

The next workshop starts in January 2026. Join now to jumpstart your 2026 writing journey.

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