Get Feedback on Your Show, Don’t Tell Assignments

Feedback –
1 Assignment


Get expert feedback on one assignment from the Show, Don’t Tell class.

Not ready for full coaching? No problem.

You can still get expert, line-by-line feedback from Seth — on any one assignment from the course.

✓ In-line comments

✓ Quick-turnaround editorial feedback

✓ A paragraph of strategy: what’s working, what to improve

✓ Learn what agents, editors, and critique groups are really seeing

Normally $119 → Today: $97

(save $22 — one-time offer only)

This is your chance to test your writing with real, professional eyes — at a fraction of the cost.

Feedback –
All Assignments


Personalized, expert feedback on all Show, Don’t Tell class assignments.

Get personalized feedback from Seth on all four course assignments:

✓ In-line margin comments

✓ Scene-level analysis + coaching

✓ A clear roadmap for stronger, more compelling writing

✓ Private, professional eyes on your pages — like working with an editor

Normally $396 when purchased separately.

Your price today: $297

(Save $99 — 25% off, only available here)

Accelerate your writing craft and build the confidence to keep going.

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Let’s figure out which path is right for you.

On this free call, we’ll create a high-level game plan to finish your novel, whether you’re stuck in the middle of a manuscript, starting a new book, or ready to go all-in on finishing.