A step-by-step system for seeing your novel’s structure clearly — and creating a concrete revision plan.
Revision: From Draft to Structure
Finished your draft? Here’s how to know what actually needs fixing.
Most writers finish their drafts and don't know what to do next. They reread from page one, hoping problems will reveal themselves. They make random changes. They polish sentences. And months later, they're still stuck—unsure if they're actually making their book better.
There's a better way.
This focused, practical course teaches you the Scenario Method, a proven 3-step system to diagnose your novel's structural problems and create a clear revision plan.
- See your entire story from three different perspectives
- Diagnose plot holes, pacing issues, and character problems
- Build a concrete "punch list" of exactly what to fix
- Revise efficiently without wandering or getting lost
🎓 Created and taught by Seth Harwood — Iowa Writers’ Workshop MFA, published novelist, and former instructor at Stanford and Harvard.
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You’ve finished your draft… but now you’re:
- rereading from page one and making random changes
- fixing sentences without knowing if the story works
- getting feedback like “the middle drags”… with no idea how to fix it
- avoiding the manuscript entirely
You're not a bad writer. You just don't have a system for seeing your structure clearly.
That system can be learned, applied, and used on every novel you write.
Most writers revise like this:
- fix sentences
- tweak paragraphs
- reread endlessly
What actually works:
- evaluate structure
- identify what belongs
- reshape the story at the book level
Most revision advice tells you what to fix. This course shows you how to see what needs fixing and gives you a concrete plan to do it.
The Scenario Method compresses your entire novel into three progressively shorter versions: 3,000 words, 1,500 words, and 500 words. Each scenario reveals different problems and helps you understand your story at a deeper level.
By the end, you'll have a clear diagnosis of what's working, what's not, and most importantly, a punch list that tells you exactly where to revise.
You’ll get:
- 7 focused instruction videos
- Step-by-step guidance on creating each scenario
- Diagnostic tools to identify structural problems
- Real examples from published novels
- Downloadable workbook and templates
- Lifetime access + future updates
- 14-Day Money-Back Guarantee
Built for real writers:
This is the same method Seth uses with his private coaching clients and on his own novels. It's designed for writers who want practical, repeatable tools, not vague advice or abstract theory.
Total value: $350+ (including instruction, templates, workbook, and lifetime access) Today: $97
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Inside the course, you’ll create three versions of your novel:
- A chapter-by-chapter breakdown (what happens)
- A compressed version (the key beats)
- A story spine (what it’s really about)t
This is how you finally see what’s working — and what isn’t.
What you’ll learn — step by step
Phase 1 · Understanding the Five Phases of Novel Work
Learn where revision fits in your overall writing process and why most writers skip the most important phase.
- Why "editing" isn't the same as "revising"
- The critical mistake that keeps writers stuck
- How to avoid polishing scenes you'll end up cutting
Phase 2 · The 3,000-Word Scenario
Create a compressed version of your novel that captures everything that happens, chapter by chapter.
- How to summarize without losing important details
- What to include (and what to leave out)
- How this scenario reveals pacing problems and plot holes
Phase 3 · The 1,500-Word Scenario
Strip your story down to just the turning points and major beats—no fluff, no extras.
- How to identify what's actually moving your story forward
- Why this becomes your revision "punch list"
- How to spot scenes that aren't pulling their weight
Phase 4 · The 500-Word Scenario
Compress your entire novel into a bird's-eye view that shows you what your story is really about.
- How to find the spine of your story
- Why this matters for querying and pitching later
- How to make sure your structure supports your theme
Phase 5 · Diagnosing Your Novel
Use your scenarios to identify specific structural problems and know exactly how to fix them.
- Common patterns that reveal pacing issues
- How to diagnose character arc problems
- When to add scenes vs. when to cut them
Phase 6 · Building Your Revision Roadmap
Turn your diagnosis into a concrete action plan—your punch list for structural revision.
- How to prioritize what to fix first
- The "punch-in" method for efficient revision
- How to know when you're done with structure and ready for scene-level work
Each module includes examples, templates, and clear action steps so you can immediately apply what you've learned to your own manuscript.
Is this course for you?
This class is designed for serious writers who’ve finished a draft and want a clear, systematic approach to making it structurally sound.
Perfect for:
- Novelists who've finished a first draft and don't know where to start
- Memoir writers looking for a proven revision framework
- Writers who keep getting "big picture" feedback but don't know how to fix it
- Anyone who's tired of rereading their manuscript without making real progress
Not a fit if you:
- Haven't finished a draft yet (finish first, then come back!)
- Want line-editing tips instead of structural guidance
- Prefer to wing it without a systematic approach
When I teach this method to writers, the response is almost always the same:
“I finally know what to do.”
That’s the shift this course is designed to create.
Simple. Believable. Effective.
What writers say about working with Seth
"It's fun having enough of the trees and leaves to actually go up above it and see what needs to move around. I know what to do now. That's a very cool feeling."
- Lana, YA Mystery Writer
"The scenario process showed me exactly where my novel was breaking down. For the first time, I had a clear plan instead of just hoping I'd figure it out."
- Coaching Client
"I've been revising for years without a system. This gave me the structure I needed to actually finish."
- Workshop Participant
Want personal feedback on your scenarios?
The core course is completely self-paced and includes all the lessons, templates, and tools you need to transform your manuscript. If you'd like more support, you'll see an option to upgrade to personal feedback from Seth after you enroll.
- Feedback on your scenarios
- Help diagnosing your specific structural issues
- Premium options with video notes or live consultation
These upgrades are optional and have limited spots each month to protect the quality of the feedback.
Meet your instructor
Seth Harwood
- MFA in Fiction from the Iowa Writers’ Workshop
- Author of 10 published books, including the bestselling Jack Palms series
- Has taught creative writing at Stanford, Harvard, UMass Boston, and more
- Coach and mentor to writers working on novels, memoirs, and story collections
Seth brings years of teaching and coaching experience into this course, distilling what actually moves the needle for writers who need to see their structure clearly and revise with purpose.
Your risk is zero
Take the course for 14 days. Watch the lessons. Create your scenarios. If you don't feel more confident and in control of your revision process, email us and you'll receive a full refund.
No hoops. No quizzes. No hard feelings. If it's not a fit, you get your money back.
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Frequently Asked Questions
How does the course work?
Once you enroll, you get instant access to all modules, video lessons, templates, and workbook. You can start right away, move at your own pace, and revisit any lesson whenever you need it.
How long do I have access to the material?
Your enrollment includes lifetime access. That means you can come back to the videos, templates, and tools any time you're revising a new manuscript—and get access to future updates.
Is this course right for beginners?
If you've finished a draft, this course is for you—whether it's your first novel or your tenth. The Scenario Method works for writers at any stage. If you haven't finished a draft yet, come back once you have something complete to work with.
Will I get personal feedback from Seth?
The core course does not include individual feedback so that you can move through the lessons at your own pace. After you enroll, you'll see options to upgrade to personal feedback on your scenarios if you'd like detailed guidance on your specific manuscript.
What if I’m busy right now?
Because the course is self-paced with lifetime access, you don't have to start immediately. You can enroll now at the current rate and begin when your schedule allows, working in short focused sessions.
How is this different from other revision advice?
Most revision courses talk about structure in abstract terms. This course gives you a concrete, repeatable system to see your structure clearly and diagnose exactly what needs to change. You'll walk away with a punch list—not just good intentions.
What if I decide it’s not for me?
You have 14 days to try the course. If you don’t feel more confident and equipped to revise your novel, email us within that window for a full refund.
If you’ve taken Show, Don’t Tell, this is the next step:
- That course helps you write strong scenes
- This one helps you make sure those scenes belong in the right story
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